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Do *Goals* Motivate Students? How about *Feedback*?
Andrew Watson
Andrew Watson

Motivation has been a HOT TOPIC this year in all the schools I’ve visited. Everywhere I go, I get questions about students’ apathy and indifference, and teachers’ frustration.

So, what can schools and teachers do?

Well, Self-Determination Theory offers a framework to answer that pressing question.

In this post, I’m going to introduce the theory — with a focus on its key concepts.

And then I’ll describe a study which helpfully reveals the complexity of enacting the theory wisely.

And, yes, as this post’s title suggests, that helpful study focuses on goals and feedback as motivational strategies.

Let’s see what researchers have discovered about the motivational benefits of goals and feedback.

Introducing Self-Determination Theory

Like many theories, self-determination theory (SDT) can be easily caricatured. Here’s the caricature:

  • Extrinsic motivation BAD!
  • Intrinsic motivation GOOD!!

These six words fall short in lots of ways, starting with this startling observation. SDT doesn’t contrast intrinsic and extrinsic motivation.

Instead, it defines six (yes, SIX) different motivational states — including four (yes, FOUR) different kinds of extrinsic motivation.

Here’s the kicker:

  • Unsurprisingly, intrinsic motivation is GOOD for learning.
  • Surprisingly, two flavors of extrinsic motivation are ALSO good for learning. (The other two flavors: not so much.)

The scholars who created the theory — Deci and Ryan — have a name for “good flavors of extrinsic motivation”; they call them “autonomous extrinsic motivation.”

At the top of this blog post, I asked: what can teachers do about apathetic students? Deci and Ryan answer: “foster the good kinds of motivation.”

Let’s Get Fostering!

Okay, if “the good kinds of motivation” can help, how do we teachers conjure them?

If I’m understanding SDT correctly, it includes bad news and good news.

  • Bad news: we really can’t create intrinsic motivation (as Deci and Ryan define it).
  • Good news: we really CAN create autonomous extrinsic motivation, which — as you recall — benefits learning.

We foster this good extrinsic motivation by focusing on three internal experiences: autonomy, relatedness, and competence.

That is: the more that my students feel in control (“autonomous”), close to one another (“related”), and effective at dealing with their environment (“competent”), the more autonous extrinsic motivation they will experience. And: the more they will learn.

The obvious implication of this theory, then: let’s focus on enhancing our students’ autonomy, relatedness, and competence.

Plausible Start

When I talk with teachers about this theory, they can easily start to brainstorm suggestions for creating autonomy, relatedness, and competence — and, presumably, the good kind of extrinsic motivation.

As a thought experiment, we can easily imagine that clear goals will have those results. And, while we’re at it, we might predict that process feedback will likewise.

Several middle school students eagerly raise their hands to answer questions

But let’s go beyond a thought experiment. Let’s have an experiment experiment — with students and data and calculations and all that good stuff.

What happens?

Happily, a research team in the Netherlands wanted to know. They ran a survey study with almost 600 students — aged 11 to 18 — in PE classes.

They asked two sets of questions.

First: did the teachers clarify the goals during class? That is, did they…

  • … tell the students what they were going to learn, or
  • … how they would be evaluated?

Likewise, did they offer process feedback? That is, did they …

  • … encourage reflection on how to improve, or
  • … discuss how to use the students’ strengths?

And so forth.

Second: they asked if the students experienced greater autonomy, relatedness, and/or competence.

To be thorough, they also asked if they experienced LESS autonomy, relatedness, and/or competence.

Once they crunched all the numbers, what did this research team find?

Not Surprising, or Surprising?

From one perspective, this study seems to be asking rather obvious questions. I mean: OF COURSE students will feel more autonomous if we tell them what the goals are, or more related if we give them feedback.

What other result would we expect?

Here’s the thing: in the world of research, we don’t just assume; we measure. And, sure enough, those measurements gave us the results we (probably) expected.

Yesclear goals enhance autonomy, relatedness, and competence.

And yesprocess feedback does too.

At the same time, the number crunching also provided surprising results.

In some cases, process feedback reduced two of those classroom experiences: “relatedness” and “competence.”

While this result might seem surprising at first, I think it’s easy to understand the chain of emotional events here.

If I give my students lots of feedback, they might feel like I’m hovering or pestering or interfering.

Of course, “hovering, pestering, and interfering” could quite easily reduce the quality of the teacher/student relationship. And, they might also reduce my students’ feelings of competence.

In other words: all that feedback could suggest the students are not doing very well. And that feeling of incompetence could — in turn — reduce the quality of their relationship with the teacher.

Solving the Conundrum

So, which is it? Should teachers give students process feedback because it enhances autonomy, relatedness, and competence? Or, should we limit process feedback, because it reduces relatedness and competence?

As is so often the case, I think we answer that question by rethinking the relationship between research and classroom practice.

Research can almost never tell teachers what to do. Instead, research is awesome at helping us think about what we do.

In this case, our thought process might sound something like this:

  • I want to create autonomous extrinsic motivation, so I should enhance my students’ sense of competence.
  • [Thinking]
  • I wonder if I can promote competence by giving them lots of feedback during today’s class.
  • [more thinking]
  • Now that I think about it, my feedback could enhance their sense of competence. But if I give too much feedback — or unwanted feedback — students could infer that I don’t have confidence in them.
  • [even more thinking]
  • So, I’ll put a note in my lesson plan to make time for feedback. But first, I need to think about the cues my students give me when the feedback is just too much…

Of course, those cues will look different depending on context.

  • 2nd graders will give different cues than 7th graders.
  • I suspect that — for cultural reasons — students in Japan signal frustration differently than those in New Zealand.
  • Students react differently to the cool, with-it teacher than they do with me. (It’s been a minute since I was the cool, with-it teacher.)

And so forth.

But if I consider self-determination theory as a THOUGHT PROCESS, not a TO-DO LIST, I’m much likelier to get the results I want.

In this case: my feedback is likelier to enhance than reduce competence. It’s therefore likelier to promote autonomous extrinsic motivation.

And my students are likelier to learn.


Krijgsman, C., Mainhard, T., van Tartwijk, J., Borghouts, L., Vansteenkiste, M., Aelterman, N., & Haerens, L. (2019). Where to go and how to get there: Goal clarification, process feedback and students’ need satisfaction and frustration from lesson to lesson. Learning and Instruction61, 1-11.

Feedback Before Grades? Research and Practice…
Andrew Watson
Andrew Watson

The plan sounds so simple:

Students practice a new skill.

Teachers give them feedback.

Using that feedback, students improve.

What could be more straightforward?

Alas, if you’ve spent more than a minute teaching, you spot a problem with the formula above: students often ignore the feedback.

For example: I write SO MUCH USEFUL GUIDANCE in the margins of my students’ papers. And yet, as far as I can tell, they just don’t spend much time reading all those helpful comments.

They tell me they want to learn. They tell me they want higher grades. They could accomplish both missions if they would just read the feedback. Oy.

It Just Might Work…

A few years ago, I devised a strategy to combat this feedback problem.

First: I wrote comments on papers as I had before.

Second: I summarized the three most important concerns at the end of the paper.

(For example:

“Be sure to focus the topic sentence on abstract nouns.

Give specific examples for all your main arguments.

Look out for danging modifiers.”)

Third: I returned the paper with the comments BUT WITHOUT A GRADE.

Fourth: Students reviewed the comments, and wrote up their own summary. (This step ensured that students read and understood the comments.)

Fifth: Then — and only then — did the students get their grades.

My thinking went like this:

My students were REALLY motivated to know their grades. If I could harness that motivation correctly, then I could get them to review and learn from the comments I spent so much time writing.

They would get the grades and learn at the same time. Brilliant! (Well, potentially brililant…)

So: Did It Work?

I did not think to collect data at the time, so I don’t have a scientific answer to the obvious question — “did this strategy work?”

But I have a few strong impressions.

First: the students were REALLY BAD at summarizing my comments, and did not like the process.

On the one hand, this conclusion suprised me. After all: I had summarized the comments for them (“topic sentences, examples, dangling modifiers”).

All they had to do was spot and re-summarize my own summary.

On the other hand, this conclusion made sense. No wonder my students hadn’t responded effectively to my comments — they didn’t even want to read them!

Second: my strategy either really helped, or made no difference.

In some cases, students quickly took advantage of this system. I could tell because my comments were different on each paper.

If the first paper asked them to focus on “abstract nouns in the topic sentence,” the next paper clearly met that goal.

Arrows pointed to the center of a target

On the second paper, my feedback focused on — say — transitional language between examples.

Because my comment summary changed from paper to paper, I could tell the system was working for these students.

I must admit, however, that not all students responded this way. Some submitted the feedback summaries as I required — and continued to make the same old mistakes.

A partial victory — but not a complete one.

So: SHOULD It Work?

My experience suggests that my witholding the grade prompted some (but not all) students to focus more on feedback.

Do we have any reseach supporting this strategy?

Sure enough, we do.

A study from 2021 shows that students who get feedback before grades improve more than those who get grades before feedback.

The researchers here, in fact, consider some of the underlying mechanisms as well.

They note that “excessive focus on grades can interfere with the students’ ability to self-assess,” and that, “in the case of [grade] disappointment…students may decide not to engage with the written comments at all.”

These truths suggest the obvious solution: postpone grades until students have time to process the feedback.

In this case college students didn’t need to go through all the extra steps that I created; that is, they didn’t summarize the feedback their teachers wrote.

Simply having extra time to peruse the feedback — before they got the grades — proved a significant benefit.

Closing Thoughts

First: I note that both my own mini-experiment and this published study took place with older, academically successful students. I don’t know of research looking at a broader, more representative sample.

Second: reasonable people might ask, “if grades distract from feedback, can’t you just do away with the grade thing altogether?”

Some schools might make that decision — and plenty of people are advocating for it. But: individual teachers almost certainly can’t stop assigning grades. So, this strategy can help one teacher at a time.

Third: I first read about this study when Jade Pearce (X-Twitter handle: @PearceMrs) wrote about it. If you’re interested in this kind of research, you should ABSOLUTELY follow her there.

TLDR: To help students focus on learning, postpone grades until they have time to review feedback.

This strategy might not help everyone, but it provides clear benefits for many.

 

 


 

Kuepper-Tetzel, C. E., & Gardner, P. L. (2021). Effects of temporary mark withholding on academic performance. Psychology Learning & Teaching20(3), 405-419.